Orientation

LI: Write an orientation that hooks the reader in.

You will need to explain what happened before the car ended up in the water, who is involved, how they are thinking and feeling, where this happened. Your orientation needs to stop just as the car enters the water.

It was a beautiful day. Just the right time to go fishing. Bob went as soon as the tide was just right. bob said that it would be the best time to get fish. He had to find the right place to put the bought but instead of reversing the boat into the water he drove his car into the monsters mouth and made the car get stuck in the monsters teeth. bob was so lucky his friends were there with him because if they weren't he would be stuck in the monsters mouth and would of drowned.

This is my Orientation that I have done about this man/woman driving his/her car into the water.