Rewrite The Ending

After she had finished performing at the Shining Stars Competition. She had just remembered that she had left her dog at her dressing room. One of the agents said to her go to the back of the stadium. Emma changed back into her clothes and removed all of the make up. Then she headed to the backstage door and sure enough the limo was waiting for her outside. When she got home she made her a raspberry spider and had got a phone call from A1. "Well done EJ, Another mission completed. Then one of her friends said that they should do a duet. Emma said "Are you sure about this'. Then Elle said " sure, with a little help from all of you we will be perfect". The main idea in the story would be to never be afraid to try something new.

- Title

EJ12 Rocky Road

- Author

Susannah Mcfarlane

- Type of Book

Adventure

- Why your ending is better

Because in the story everything turns out good and nothing happens but in my ending there is going to be the main idea of the story