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Saturday 26 April 2014

Rewrite The Ending

EJ12 has saved the day again and has everybody yelling so hard their throats were about to pop. After that she had just remembered that she had a big test for school the next day. So she raced as fast as she could back home on her board to try and finish her studies. As she got home her mother said she had to catch up in more school work because some of her tests are really low. Then her mother helped Emma in her studies. The next day at school she had to sit her big exam and she hoped that she would get most of the question right. When she finished her exam she took it to the front and then the teacher marked it. The whole class got there tests back and Emma was really happy because she had got all of her equations right. She had 2 really big days. The first day taking the baby penguin back to his home and the second day passing her exams. The main idea in this story would be to always focus in your school work instead of other things.

- Title
EJ12 Hot & Cold
- Author
Susannah Mcfarlane
- Type of Book
Adventure
- Why your ending is better
Because in the story everything turns out good and nothing happens but in my ending there is going to be the main idea of the story

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