Rewrite The Ending

Emma was really obsessed to try find what had scared he during the night. She always wondered to herself what was all those noises she kept hearing in the night. Sometimes she thought that there might be a man outside staring at her through the window or a monster scratching on the window. Sometimes she even scared to walk down the hallway. But she would always carry her favourite teddy bear with her if she was scared. Then she said to herself that she needed to handle it. She slowly walked down the hallway holding her teddy with all of her grip. Then she heard the T.V on. So she tip toed as fast as she could to the back of the couch. But then her mother caught her behind the couch. They both walked back to Emma's bed and tucked her back into bed. Emma quickly changed and said to herself that Special agents are not afraid of anything so she went to the window to see what the scary sounds were but it was just the shadow of a tree on the window. After that she knew that she was really silly for thinking that there was monsters outside. Then changed back and went fast to sleep. The main idea in story would be to never be afraid and be strong.

- Title

EJ12 In The Dark

- Author

Susannah Mcfarlane

- Type of Book

Adventure

- Why your ending is better

Because in the story everything turns out good and nothing happens but in my ending there is going to be the main idea of the story